Kuishinbou Clan Arsenal Prt. 2

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Kuishinbou Clan Arsenal Prt. 2Mar 9, 2020 1:16:42 GMT -5
Kuishinbou Satsuko
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age 47 years old birthday July 21 rank Elite Jonin occupation Lady of Kusa
Kuishinbou Clan Leader/Heir or a Kuishinbou that has proven herself.

NAME: Ōkui no Kishin no Kunō [Bane of the Evil Spirit of Gluttony]
RANK: S-rank
CLASSIFICATION: Supplementary-Offensive
ELEMENT: N/A
OWNER: The Kuishinbou Clan
DESCRIPTION:

Practically a legendary relic of the Kuishinbou clan. It is usually locked deep within a secret basement in the clan leader's home and thus permission, skill, status, and worth to the clan is needed to own or be wielded. No one but a clan member may hold it unless heavily trusted comrades. While thieves, however, will be hunted down like an animal. Lending it is a great crime and sin against the clan while losing it is met with dishonor and scorn from the clan.

It is made with the teeth of the first clan leader that joined Kusagakure, pulled out, and melted down along with the most durable minerals the Daimyo could buy. Done with a secret blacksmith technique known by the clan. The same one used to make their other four weapons that have also been passed down. The blades, cable, and hilt are also made out of this newly made and strong metal.

The blade is colored a pearly white, like their teeth, with emerald letters from their language that reads ‘devour your enemies' on one side. The total length of the main blade of this large, straight ōdachi is 4 ft. long. The cylinder hilt is about 1 ft. 2 inches in length with the secondary blade at the end of the hilt being 8 inches long. The sheath is also a cylinder, making it look like a spear when sheathed. The long blade's cutting edge is sharpened like this, making it rip and shred while cutting as a regular blade should.

The secondary and smaller silvery blade has the Kuishinbou clan emblem painted in emerald green. The edge on this blade is normal unlike the other, with a 10 cm hook at the base, on the flat side of the dagger. Due to the sheath matching the hilt, then the blade locked into place properly, it appears like a spear instead. Covering the metal of the hilt and sheath is a the same durable teeth-metal, with an extra soft layer of dark green, tightly wrapped cloth.

This is said that this is the weapon that would spawn the designs of Shitai o Taberu Yari [Corpse Eating Javelin] and Shitai o Taberu Kiba [Corpse Eating Fang].

ABILITIES:

Chakra Conductive: It can conduct any element fed into the blade and even the cable or sheath of the weapon. It, like other Kuishnbou, has the seals to allow one to use Kaiju Taberu Isan no Kyōka [Monster Eating Stomach Acid Enhancement].

Legendary Durability: Made from not only one of the strongest teeth in the history of the Kuishinbou, but it is also made of the finest steel the Daimyo of the Nohara no Kuni could buy. Mixed together it is a seemingly neigh unbreakable sword and sheath.

Legendary Sharpness: Said to have sharpness that rivals (but not equal) the legendary Kusanagi, on both blades. Despite being serrated, it's cutting power is unquestionable. It has been advised that one must be careful when cleaning the blade as it has ripped apart members of the clan's hands in the past.

Unique Craftsmanship: Like the spear it would later inspire, it has a thin but highly durable cable within the hilt of the blade, allowing the dagger tip to be fired out with it attached and used to ensnare and trap unfortunate foes. The cable is razor-sharp and has a length is about 50 ft. in total.


NAME: Kishin no Ōkui no Yoroi to Kamen [Armor and Mask of the Evil Spirit of Gluttony]
RANK: S-rank
CLASSIFICATION: Supplementary-Defensive
ELEMENT: N/A
OWNER: The Kuishinbou Clan
DESCRIPTION:

Practically a legendary relic of the Kuishinbou clan. It is usually locked deep within a secret basement in the clan leader's home and thus permission, skill, status, and worth to the clan is needed to own or be wielded. No one but a clan member may hold it unless heavily trusted comrades. While thieves, however, will be hunted down like an animal. Lending it is a great crime and sin against the clan while losing it is met with dishonor and scorn from the clan.

It is made with the teeth of the first clan leader that joined Kusagakure, pulled out, and melted down along with the most durable minerals the Daimyo could buy. Done with a secret blacksmith technique known by the clan. The same one used to make their other four weapons that have also been passed down. This makes this the sixth one of their mighty arsenal.

The mask is white, with spiky black hair covering the back, made from the hair said clan leader's horse upon their death. The hair reaches to the small of most people's back. The mask completely cover's one's face, including the sides of their jaws and their chin. The eye holes are covered with durable crimson-tinted glass, glass equally as durable as the rest of the armor. On the mask are jaws, resembling that of the clan's symbol.

The rest of the armor is a brown leather crop top that cover's only above the stomach of one who wears it, so only the breasts and back. It is reinforced with white plates, the said plates made up of the durable new metal. There are also rounded out shoulder pads, elbow and knee pads with brown straps. For the forearms and legs are a metal plate, same as the others, layered over leather and is to be strapped to the limbs.

There are fingerless gloves and reinforced yet flexible sandals to protect the user's hands and feet. On the bottom half is more of the brown cloth to wrap around the wearer's waist, with the same durable, while metal plates protecting the thighs and upper legs. However, the cloth is cut in a way to allow flexibility within the legs. Lastly, on the back is the clan's symbol colored white, black, and green.

ABILITIES:

Chakra Conductive: It can conduct any element fed into the blade and even the cable or sheath of the weapon. It, like other Kuishnbou, has the seals to allow one to use Kaiju Taberu Isan no Kyōka [Monster Eating Stomach Acid Enhancement]. However, elements cannot be conducted when using the chakra barrier ability.

Legendary Durability: On the metallic areas, it's durability is equal to that of Ōkui no Kishin no Kunō [Bane of the Evil Spirit of Gluttony], while still being rather light in weight. However, it isn't capable of resisting damage in exposed areas of the armor.

Inheritability: The armor can adapt to the chakra and the overall build of anyone who pours its chakra into it when placing it on, making it always fit the new owner.

Chakra Barrier: The exposed areas can become protected by a thin, translucent barrier between the armored metallic areas of the armor, but only at half of the durability of the actual plates, being about the strength of iron. The barrier still allows the wearer to be as flexible as they need to be and can be enhanced with kekkei ninjutsu such as Kekkai: Ōkīdesu Kyōka Suru [Barrier: Greater Strengthen] for example (must be within reason. However, to activate the barrier in the first place, one must have a ninjutsu spec and use 5 handseals, with the initial costs being high with a medium drain). Then any kekkei jutsu that can be reasonably be used to enhance it take the same chakra cost and handseals on top of the medium drain. It can only be kept up for 10 rotations before shutting down, and any more could drain the wearer's chakra completely, killing them. Lastly, it can't be enhanced with elemental jutsu while being used.


NAME: Shitai o Taberu Ya to Yadzutsu Yumi [Bow, Arrows and Quiver of the Corpse Eater]
RANK: A-rank
CLASSIFICATION: Supplementary
ELEMENT: N/A
OWNER: The Kuishinbou Clan
DESCRIPTION:

The hidden sister of Shitai o Taberu Yari [Corpse Eating Javelin], Shitai o Taberu Kiba [Corpse Eating Fang], and Shitai o Taberu Tate [Corpse Eating Shield]. It is a pearly white bow with a length of about five ft. in total. The bow is covered with soft, green cloth, to make it easier on the hands who wields it. To match it, it has a brown leather quiver with the clan's symbol on it, with a total of 30 arrows that fill it. Despite appearing simple, one must be wary to keep track of the arrows. Losing them means one has to replace them with their own teeth and to make more than thirty is forbidden as it takes time and energy to make the arrows. One must respect it and the rules in place for it to even gain ownership of it.

ABILITIES:

Chakra Conductive: Not only is the bow chakra conductive, but the arrows are as well. They can take any chakra nature and are made specifically to handle and use archer/bow styles. The bow and arrows can use Kaiju Taberu Isan no Kyōka [Monster Eating Stomach Acid Enhancement].

Extreme Durability: The bow is more durable than the arrows, however, both have the durability that a weapon gets by using the Kuishinbou's teeth mixed with iron.

Arrows & Quiver: There is a max of thirty arrows that are to be used with this bow. The arrows have the same durability and such as the bow. One can place a tag or ask for permission to change the arrowheads for more of a rotation effect or what have you. If the arrows are lost or destroyed, one must replace them in character and it is severely frowned upon to use it again unless one has their max of thirty.

last edit by Kuishinbou Satsuko on May 28, 2020 8:22:30 GMT -5
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Kuishinbou Clan Arsenal Prt. 2May 28, 2020 4:05:53 GMT -5
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Remove mention of melting the teeth. Could be crushed and mixed in with the metal, but not melted.

Need mention of how you carry it. You can’t carry it on your hilt, carrying it on the back is impractical more than anything. So, it has to be carried by hand if you want to have a chacne at drawing it in time to respond to an attack etc.
ōdachi is usually 90.9 cm. Not 152 cm(5 ft).You want the enitre blade, secondary blade and hilt to measure 7 ft 10 inches?

Just scale the whole thing down if you want to be able to even use this in combat without being a giant.

What is the cable you mention? It needs to be explained in the appearance. Not just in the ability section.

abilities:
Durability: Note that only applies to the primary blade’s sheath, as the secondary is of wood

Cable: How do you reel it in? Manually? Chakra cost?

ARMOR:
Just how many teeth does this woman have? First two very large blades and now an entire set of armor?
So no armor to protect the soft tissue of the tummy?

Chakra: This is just a copy paste from the odachi. Rewrite.
Chaka barrier: You’d need to keep your hands on it while strengthening it. Note this.
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