[Kaku Shizuka]

universal jutsu | genjutsu NAME: Gokai [False Sense Technique] RANK: B CHAKRA USAGE: Very Low CLASSIFICATION: Genjutsu HANDSEALS: One Hand-Sign: Ram TRIGGER: Visual or Auditory  REQUIREMENT: Enhanced Chakra Control & Genjutsu Specialization  DESCRIPTION: This allows the user to adjust the targets sensor special ability to their liking. They can change the targets perception of the chakra signatures and distances. In normal circumstances, a high-ranking kai [in accordance to the kai rules] can effectively dispel this genjutsu. Because of the complex and effective nature of the sensor ability, this jutsu is usually only cultivated by devoted genjutsu specialists.

[Wynne]

- Chakra usage: This definitely needs to be higher than very low. I would say around medium would be fine. Since you are affecting your opponent's chakra sense, it's gonna take a decent amount of chakra. You also need a To Maintain section since you are continuously affecting their chakra sense. Very low to low should be fine.

- Trigger: Needs to be more specific. If its auditory, how is it enacted? Certain words, snap of the fingers, a scream? If it's visual what needs to be seen? A certain handseal, a frown, a wink?

- Requirement: Enhanced Chakra Control is fine, but Genjutsu Specialization isn't really needed since its only a B rank. While we're on requirements Chakra Sensory would need to be added as well. I don't believe you can cast a genjutsu like this without it. How can you affect a sense/know how to affect one you don't have? Similar to how a blind person doesn't really know what colors are due to a lack of vision.

- Description: This part is way too vague. How are you adjusting their sensor ability? Are you making it seem like there are more people than there actually are? Or making their senses feel staticky so they can't sense well in a certain area? Are you making the sensed chakra seem closer/farther than it actually is? Take out this part as well "In normal circumstances, a high-ranking kai [in accordance to the kai rules] can effectively dispel this genjutsu." Not really sure what you're going for here? Why would this situation not be in all circumstances?

[Kaku Shizuka]

Going to withdraw it for now. Sorry for the inconvenience, & thank you for the feedback. This is super helpful for future submissions. 🙏

(may reapply this in the future)

[Wynne]

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