Hi Muramasa, sorry this one's been sat on for a while. There's a lot to contemplate with it and I wanted to gather my thoughts before putting out a formal review going through what I'm thinking. I think this does kind of fall under the space time ninjutsu banned clause, though I'm less concerned about that with the distance restrictions placed upon it that would make it pretty unfeasible to summon items from across incredibly vast distances.
My ultimate question with regards to this jutsu is this: Other more efficient methods of achieving the same effect exist, so are we certain this jutsu needs to exist?
Specifically I am referring to the body sealing technique.
NAME: Karada Fuinjutsu [Body Sealing Technique] RANK: B CHAKRA USAGE: Low CLASSIFICATION: Fūinjutsu ELEMENT: - HANDSEALS: 0 DESCRIPTION:
An upgrade to the Hikin Fuinjutsu [Generic Sealing Technique], the user creates a seal on their own skin for which a multitude of objects can be stored. If cast on the user themselves, the seals become reactive to the body's own chakra, and it becomes more difficult for others to forcibly draw items from the seal. The closer the mark is made to the center of one's chakra coil, at the pit of their gut, the stronger this protection becomes.
Directly attuned to the user's chakra, seals take up half the space they ordinarily would. And in the case of it being sealed on the user, items can be released via small chakra burst rather than touch. If you seal your items on your own skin, this provides the look of tattoos and the surprise element of summoning without scrolls that you're looking for, plus you can carry larger items in less space than you would on scrolls. And you don't need to potentially circumvent space-time rules and lose a lot of blood in order to summon these items.
Another reasonable method might just be apping a cloak or other piece of C-rank equipment designed to take seals on the inside/underside of the fabric so that items can be summoned by surprise that way.
Basically speaking, we can keep trying to balance this jutsu if you would like, but I believe there already exist much more efficient methods to accomplish what you would like to do.
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