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Onigo JutsuSept 21, 2023 20:56:33 GMT -5
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NAME: Āmuburēdo no Jutsu [Bladed Arm Technique]

RANK: C

CHAKRA USAGE: Low

CLASSIFICATION: Ninjutsu

ELEMENT: --

HANDSEALS: 3

REQUIREMENT: Onigata SA

DESCRIPTION:
While in their Onigata form, the user creates blades that extend from their wrists to a length totaling four feet.




NAME: Sōkō Kōra no Jutsu [Armored Carapace Technique]

RANK: B

CHAKRA USAGE: High

CLASSIFICATION: Ninjutsu

ELEMENT: --

HANDSEALS: 7

REQUIREMENT: Onigata SA

DESCRIPTION:
While in their Onigata form, the user flows chakra through their body causing their skin to harden akin to a suit of armor. Unlike your standard suit of armor this technique originates from the Onigo's skin itself, countering the drawback of being able to be removed. This also means that if the armor is "broken" the Onigo suffers bodily harm as a result, providing the jutsu's main drawback apart from it's high chakra cost.




NAME: Jetto Suishin no Jutsu [Jet Propulsion Technique]

RANK: S

CHAKRA USAGE: Very High

CLASSIFICATION: Ninjutsu

ELEMENT: --

HANDSEALS: 14

REQUIREMENT: Onigata SA, Enhanced Chakra Reserves SA

DESCRIPTION:
One of the strongest techniques in an Onigo's arsenal. Upon performing the necessary handseals while in their Onigata form the Onigo points their body in a direction and extends their arms. Protrusions then appear from every inch of their body, tearing through clothing if necessary, prior to releasing a massive, violent blast of chakra 360 degrees around the Onigo who acts as a focal point. While powerful there are a multitude of drawbacks to this jutsu. Firstly the high chakra costs and intense wear and tear on the Onigata causes the Onigo to drop their transformation upon the jutsu's completion. Secondly the Onigo is required to remain rooted in place while the jutsu is being used. Thirdly the jutsu cannot be targeted, causing widespread destruction and lacking a differential in friend or foe. The final drawback is that the jutsu, while immensely powerful, is also fairly slow. The aforementioned protrusions appear once the handseals have completed, and the jutsu's blast appears a half-second after that.
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Onigo JutsuSept 28, 2023 9:17:53 GMT -5
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Āmuburēdo no Jutsu [Bladed Arm Technique]: I need more detail of this techniques description; material strength, cutting strength, etc. Also please add a caveat that you can't use chakra conductive techniques with this blade.

Sōkō Kōra no Jutsu [Armored Carapace Technique]: Please add material strength and any other weaknesses intrinsic to wearing armor aka vulnerable joints/that it will slow down the onigo's natural movement speed slightly.

Jetto Suishin no Jutsu [Jet Propulsion Technique]: Increase the handseals to 20. Try to give a description of what the bodily protrusions look like. Can you also explain whether its a linear 360 blast or spherical? what happens if they're damaged during the jutsu? Can you please state the range of the chakra blasts.




Approval: (in progress)




last edit by zazu on Sept 28, 2023 9:19:25 GMT -5
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