[Izusume Rentaro]

Putoru izusume rentaro SPECIES: Golden Eagle RANK: B CHAKRA NATURE: Raiton APPEARANCE: Putoru is a great raptor with a wingspan of over eleven feet long, with a body measuring out to 110 inches from beak to tailfeathers. They are a rich golden, burnt orange color with yellow and red highlights, as well as raven accents. A black zig-zag pattern adorns each wing, as well as some of its tail. It has a massive head and body, with a small throat and dainty, sharp talons. From its head sprouts a spikey mane of feathers, similar to the way its butt explodes into the same spikey plume. Its underbelly is black. Its face is pinched, with marvelous slanted yellow eyes encircled by black markings, looking almost like cat-eye eyeliner. Its beak is short, but deadly sharp. PERSONALITY: Putoru is an old bird, wise beyond its years and a little abrasive. It's witty, sarcastic, and incredibly conniving for a speechless familiar. Although it is stubborn, Putoru has learned to trust Ren, only squawking in defiance in an attempt to rile him up. This is not to say Putoru is a particularly pleasant bird, as they often seem either unimpressed or all together judgmental. It is also incredibly unfriendly, easily refusing to help anyone that isn't Ren. ABILITIES: Big Putoru's impressive, massive size is an anomaly among most avian of its species. Even though it weighs about 13kg, Putoru can flawlessly take flight with its hollow bones. Unfortunately, Putoru is not incredibly fast, flying only 100mph without anything on its back and 60mph with added weight on. Strong Its gargantuan size does not come without its merits; Putoru is incredibly strong. It can carry up to five times its weight; this is good for carrying heavy objects or giving Ren rides.

[Yofie]

Big & Strong
I will have to ask you to choose either big or strong.

Immune to Raiton
This ability I will have to ask you to completely remove. Familiars are just normal animals, not meant to be used in combat and I think if you grill a normal bird with electricity it would die, even if it's not a big amount.

Possibly you could use the two ability slots to have the two abilities of him being big and the other strong. But even if he is strong remember he is just a bird not meant to fight anyone, and the bird would not be stronger than any level shinobi. With strong he could be used to transfer things or something along those lines, not to be in active combat.

[Izusume Rentaro]

fixed~ broke big & strong into two abilities and took out anything that would indicate it's used for battle

[Yofie]

And I will have to ask you to lower the speed - 100mph without anything on its back and 60mph with added weight on.

[Izusume Rentaro]

done~

[Yofie]

[1/2 approved]

[Eleri]

To clarify, familiars are normal animals. What you have here, even for an SA making him bigger, is too big for a normal animal and goes into the range of a summon. An oversized familiar might be ok for a familiar based hijutsu clan, but on average we shouldn't be seeing what is essentially a flying dinosaur as a normal familiar.

Please drop the size and weight, Golden Eagles get up to 40 inches long at the highest end, that is 36% of the size of your familiar right now. I'm not sure I'm comfortable with the idea of a regular familiar like this being used as a flying mount either, carrying items for your character sure, carrying them as anything other than a feathered parachute, not so much.

[Elumenate]

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