[Koketsu Akito]

kin SPECIES: Golden Amur Tiger RANK: A  CHAKRA NATURE: Raiton APPEARANCE: A male Amur tiger of peculiar golden coloring and below average size - weighing in at around 360 lbs/163 kg and measuring 70 in/178 cm from nose to tail tip. He is slim and lean, with piercing golden eyes. PERSONALITY: The most laid-back of all his siblings, Kin can often times be considered lazy. This leads to most enemies underestimating him - when he is, in fact, the strongest of the four tigers. He's fun-loving and sweet, and loves his brothers and Akito dearly. In battle, he's an all-rounder. ABILITIES: Unnatural Intelligence Granted unnatural intelligence due to his bond with Akito. While not capable of human speech, Kin obviously does not bear the base intelligence of a regular tiger - but rather that of a human, with problem-solving abilities and the allowance for higher thinking.  Enhanced Senses While it's said that tigers have superb senses, it's doubly true for this group. Due to their bond with Akito, each tiger can see colors in the same way that humans can. Additionally, they can hear and smell up to 2x better than a regular tiger. Enhanced Speed Kin, like his brother Kuro, is blessed with enhanced speed. While a normal tiger may have a range of 30 - 40 mph in bursts, these two are 2x as fast.

shiro SPECIES: White Amur Tiger RANK: A  CHAKRA NATURE: Futon APPEARANCE: A male Amur tiger of abnormally pale coloring and above average size - weighing in at around 680 lbs/308 kg and measuring 85 in/216 cm from nose to tail tip. He is bulky and strong, with piercing golden eyes. PERSONALITY: Shiro can be a bit of a know-it-all, often annoying his siblings. He has issues with turning off his brain and relaxing, and can be quick to anger. However, he loves his brothers and Akito, and is very protective of them. He's the strategist of the group.  ABILITIES: Unnatural Intelligence Granted unnatural intelligence due to his bond with Akito. While not capable of human speech, Shiro obviously does not bear the base intelligence of a regular tiger - but rather that of a human, with problem-solving abilities and the allowance for higher thinking. Enhanced Senses While it's said that tigers have superb senses, it's doubly true for this group. Due to their bond with Akito, each tiger can see colors in the same way that humans can. Additionally, they can hear and smell up to 2x better than a regular tiger. Enhanced Strength Shiro, like his brother Aoi, is blessed with enhanced strength. While a normal tiger is 6x stronger than an average human civilian, these two are double that, at 12x stronger than your average human.

aoi SPECIES: Maltese Amur Tiger RANK: A  CHAKRA NATURE: Suiton APPEARANCE: A male Amur tiger of peculiar blue/gray coloring and above average size - weighing in at around 670 lbs/304 kg and measuring 80 in/203 cm from nose to tail tip. He is large and well-muscled, with piercing golden eyes. PERSONALITY: Aoi is relatively sickly, and often takes his weakness to heart. He may be the most insecure of the rest of them, but he's also the best advice giver. He's the healer of the group.  ABILITIES: Unnatural Intelligence Granted unnatural intelligence due to his bond with Akito. While not capable of human speech, Aoi obviously does not bear the base intelligence of a regular tiger - but rather that of a human, with problem-solving abilities and the allowance for higher thinking. Enhanced Senses While it's said that tigers have superb senses, it's doubly true for this group. Due to their bond with Akito, each tiger can see colors in the same way that humans can. Additionally, they can hear and smell up to 2x better than a regular tiger. Enhanced Strength Shiro, like his brother Aoi, is blessed with enhanced strength. While a normal tiger is 6x stronger than an average human civilian, these two are double that, at 12x stronger than your average human.

kuro SPECIES: Black Amur Tiger RANK: A  CHAKRA NATURE: Katon APPEARANCE: A male Amur tiger of abnormally dark coloring and below average size - weighing in at around 330 lbs/150 kg and measuring 65 in/165 cm from nose to tail tip. He is slender and petite, with piercing golden eyes. PERSONALITY: The smallest, yet bravest of the four. He takes on a rogue type role, as he's the stealthiest and the trickiest. He's mischievous and loves to play tricks on others, especially his brothers. He's the spy/scout of the group.  ABILITIES: Unnatural Intelligence Granted unnatural intelligence due to his bond with Akito. While not capable of human speech, Kuro obviously does not bear the base intelligence of a regular tiger - but rather that of a human, with problem-solving abilities and the allowance for higher thinking. Enhanced Senses While it's said that tigers have superb senses, it's doubly true for this group. Due to their bond with Akito, each tiger can see colors in the same way that humans can. Additionally, they can hear and smell up to 2x better than a regular tiger. Enhanced Speed Kuro, like his brother Kin, is blessed with enhanced speed. While a normal tiger may have a range of 30 - 40 mph in bursts, these two are 2x as fast.

[Yofie]

[1/2 approved]

[Han]

Shiro -

Smartest of the four, yet all of the tigers listed have unnatural intelligence. That would mean they're the same amount of intelligence...

Enhanced strength: What's an average human in this case? Shinobi of A-Rank ability with a strength SA could probably go toe-to-toe so if your intention was to make these tigers stronger than that, that would be a no-go.

Aoi -

Weakest of the four, yet he has an enhanced strength SA that makes him 12x stronger than an average human (which needs to be addressed the same as Shiro)

Kuro -

As a note, tigers don't run for long periods of time so that 30/40mph is burst speed moments, so if your intention was an all around speed enhancement then I suggest lowering that "times two" bit.

[Koketsu Akito]

Shiro - took away the 'smartest of the four' bit. For him and Aoi, I also added clarified that the 'average human' referenced is a civilian.

For Kin and Kuro, I added that their speed is only in bursts.

[Han]

All -

Enhanced Senses:
As a rule of thumb you will have to pick one sense to enhance. Tigers already are quite good with their senses, so please pick one sense to fully enhance (one tiger can have hearing, another sense of smell, another eyesight, but not all in one go)

Aoi -

I still don't understand how he is sickly/weak and has an enhanced strength SA.

Overall:
I need to note that these are not like summons, you say one is the "healer" of the group - yet unless you mean purely in terms of just being comforting then it wouldn't be allowed because he can't perform techniques - familiars are just regular animals with a little bit of extra oomph in general. They can't perform techniques, or really do anything. You'd also be limited to one tiger per thread in terms of missions/fights, so please keep that in mind.

I recommend looking over other approved familiars so you can get a sense of how to write these special abilities.

I'm kind of not seeing the benefit of having four tigers that all do the same thing? Why not mix and match a bit more? Think about other SAs like durability, endurance, reflexes, etc.

[Yofie]

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