list any restrictions here - This should say personal jutsu
In General:
Chakra Usage should be pre-determined you might see off cases of it not on site, but more recent jutsu really shouldn't have been approved in that manner. A different cost should essentially be a different jutsu.
Iwagakure Kinjutsu; you should be explaining clearly you're consuming the chalk with the hands and explaining how long it takes for the chakra to be applied. I'd suggest bigger explosions take longer, but all should minimally take one round of posts to do.
Bakudan Choku: Kuro Hae Taigun [Explosive Chalk Powder: Blackfly Swarm] - hidden mist covers a whole battlefield, you'll have to be more specific, if it's a number please try to associate blast per fly, if it's more going to be a 'mist of Xm's radius', then keep in mind what'd blast past that initial radius and it'll be very hard to get this approved as too large. Especially a B-rank.
Bakudan Choku: Kimura-gumo [Explosive Chalk Powder: Kimura Spider] - It'd be easier to describe burst force and size than stating two explosion notes, similarly that makes this jutsu at the whims of possible future edits to that item. It'd be best this jutsu's description be independent. I will need a number of the spiders and size, as well as a reason they can burrow.
Bakudan Choku: Jibaku Bunshin [Explosive Chalk Powder: Self-destructive Clone] - I'd need a number or at least a max number, I'd honestly suggest 1, but no more than 3. I'd likely judge the burst radius of chalk, then following explosion based on what number you choose. I'd suggest structuring this jutsu like other elemental clones in which it gets to use that type of jutsu in term and stick to one clone.
Bakudan Choku: Remon Gurenēdo [Explosive Chalk Powder: Lemon Grenades] - The low grade grenade as a medium B-rank would be the most workable, but I think you'd be best stuck to one. I'd like a clearer range, I'd also point out that this really misses out on the Iwagakure Kinjutsu factor of giving the chalk life.
Bakudan Choku: Maneru [Explosive Chalk Powder: Mimic] - I'm sorry, but I don't see this as approvable. It's unclear how it mimicks or what it does afterwards, it's more confusing with the fact it's costs and everything are adjustable. How would you even purchase a jutsu of multiple ranks?
Fūbaku Maneru [Explosive Mimic] - Same as other jutsu, I don't think this is approvable as a singular jutsu. It's too vague.
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