Kirigakure | Elite Jounin | Kaguya Mizuki

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Kirigakure | Elite Jounin | Kaguya MizukiMar 13, 2024 15:30:32 GMT -5
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Kaguya Mizuki
the Ghost of bones

BASIC INFORMATION

NAME: -- Kaguya Mizuki
AGE: --  33
GENDER: -- Male
BIRTHDAY: -- October 3rd, 990
VILLAGE: -- Kirigakure
CLAN: -- Kaguya / Yuki
RANK: -- Elite Jounin
POSITION: -- Genin Team 2 Leader
OTHER ALIAS:
Hone no Yūrei "Ghost of Bones" [world]

A nickname Mizuki picked up while he was in the Hunter-Nin division of Kirigakure. This is due to his combined use of the Yuki clan's "Hidden in Frost" technique in combination with his bone-white armor while using the Kaguya's "Dance of the Walnut".

Kuransureiyā "Clan Slayer"[kaguya / yuki clans]

A nickname Mizuki picked up during the civil war of Kirigakure, Mizuki earned this moniker from his fellow Kaguya for how he would hunt down and kill his fellow clansmen during skirmishes.

Traitor Born [academy students]

A name Mizuki picked up while he was in the ninja academy because of his clan's involvement in the Kirigakure Civil War.



APPEARANCE

HEIGHT: -- 6'4" / 193 cm
WEIGHT: -- 189 lbs / 85.73 kg

Mizuki Kaguya, standing tall at 6'4" and weighing 189lbs, possesses a lean stature that exudes an air of elegance. His waist-length white hair, adorned with a black ribbon featuring a blue underside and gold ornamentation, is secured in place by two ornate gold hairclips, one of which bears a feather-like blue attachment, positioned above his left ear. His piercing dark blue-shaded eyes and pointed ears accentuate his pale skin.

Draped in a sophisticated ensemble, Mizuki wears a white shirt with ruffled cuffs and a matching ruffled jabot at his collar, transitioning from white to a deep blue hue at its tails, secured by an ornate gold brooch featuring an iridescent teardrop center and a dangling blue gem. His hands are clad in black gloves adorned with gold rivets at the knuckles. Over the shirt, he dons a long navy-blue jacket adorned with indigo patterns and intricate gold details, including fleur-de-lis shaped closures on the folded cuffs, with the sides fading into a brighter teal hue.

Completing his ensemble, Mizuki wears navy-colored pants overlaid with thigh-high black spats featuring golden details. His shoes, also black with gold accents, boast blue soles. The ensemble is further complemented by a dark blue capelet attached to the jacket, featuring wide notched lapels in gold and blue, adorned with intricate gold details and teal designs. Two gold ornaments dangle from the front ends of the capelet.


PERSONALITY

NINDO: -- Excellence in Duty: Championing Truth and Order with Integrity.

Mizuki Kaguya embodies the personality of an ESTJ, or Executive, with a blend of admirable qualities and challenges that shape his character.

Dedicated and Strong-willed, Mizuki possesses an unwavering commitment to seeing tasks through to completion, refusing to abandon his responsibilities regardless of difficulty or opposition. He strives for perfection in all aspects of his life and defends his principles relentlessly, exhibiting a strong will that shapes his actions and decisions.

Direct and Honest, Mizuki values facts over abstract ideas or opinions, often delivering straightforward statements with unwavering honesty. He is loyal, patient, and reliable, keeping his word and exemplifying stability and security in his relationships and endeavors.

Enjoying the creation of order, Mizuki thrives in structured environments where rules, structures, and clear roles are established. As an Excellent Organizer, he confidently distributes tasks and responsibilities, showcasing his leadership capabilities.

However, Mizuki's inflexibility and stubbornness sometimes hinder his ability to consider alternative perspectives or solutions. Uncomfortable with change, he clings to tradition and can become judgmental towards those who deviate from his beliefs or methods.

Driven by a desire for social status and respect, Mizuki may prioritize meeting others' expectations over addressing his own needs, struggling to relax and express emotions freely. Despite these challenges, Mizuki's dedication, honesty, and leadership qualities make him a valued member of his community and a reliable presence in the lives of those around him


HISTORY


Birth (990 yr): Kaguya Mizuki was born in the year [990] in the Hidden mist village to Kaguya Tatsuya; a seasoned Special Jounin and member of the Hunter-Nin division, and Yuki Hana, an academy instructor. Both of his parents were greatly respected within Kirigakure and their respective clans. As Mizuki reached the age of just one year old, he was torn away from his father’s influence and the Kaguya side of his family. This was due to the fact that in the year [991], the Kaguya clan; including his father, betrayed the village of Kirigakure and sided with the Diamyo. This war between the Diamyo and the land of Kirigakure had a lasting impact on Mizuki as his father was no longer around to see him. Mizuki’s mother did her best to ease the pain of his father leaving, however, Mizuki still grew ever resentful of his father even from a young age.

Academy Student (995 yr): As an academy student Mizuki’s name was changed to Yuki Mizuki by his mother. This was to protect him from those that would wish to harm him while the village was still at war with the Diamyo and the Kaguya clan. This did stave off the bullying for a little while; however, when Mizuki started displaying his clan’s bone manipulation powers, word spread quickly about who and what he was. His name during the academy was ‘traitor born’ and it was no secret that his father was a traitor to Kirigakure. Every single one of the academy students and even the instructors treated him like garbage. All except one, Mononoke. This was because she too, was a Kaguya. He was unsure as to why she had stayed instead of going with their fellow clansmen; but he was glad that he wasn’t alone.

Genin (1001 yr): Graduating from the academy marked a significant milestone in Mizuki's journey as a shinobi. Assigned to a Genin team alongside his childhood friend Mononoke Kaguya and two other talented ninjas, Mizuki embarked on missions under the guidance of their jonin sensei, Takeshi Sato. Together, they faced various challenges, from battling rogue ninja to carrying out diplomatic missions on behalf of Kirigakure. As Mizuki and his team honed their skills, Kirigakure continued to prosper under the leadership of Mizukage Nobuhiro, who remained committed to ensuring the village's safety and prosperity.

During this time, Mizuki's bond with Mononoke deepened, evolving into a budding romance that blossomed amidst the chaos of their missions. Their shared experiences forged a connection that transcended their duties as shinobi, serving as a source of strength and support as they navigated the complexities of their world. As they faced each challenge together, Mizuki and Mononoke became a formidable team, their unwavering loyalty to each other and their village driving them to new heights of achievement.

Chuunin (1005 yr): The Chuunin Exams marked a turning point in Mizuki's journey, both as a shinobi and as a man. As he competed against his peers from other villages, Mizuki demonstrated his prowess on the battlefield, showcasing the skills he had honed through years of training and dedication. Amidst the chaos of the exams, Mizuki found the courage to confess his feelings to Mononoke, laying bare his heart and soul for her to see. To his delight, Mononoke reciprocated his feelings, igniting a spark that would forever change the course of their lives.

As Mizuki and Mononoke's relationship blossomed, so too did their abilities as shinobi. United by their love for each other and their village, they faced each challenge with renewed determination, their bond growing stronger with each passing day. Meanwhile, Kirigakure faced external threats as tensions rose with neighboring villages, testing the village's resolve and unity. Despite the challenges they faced, Mizuki remained steadfast in his commitment to protect Mononoke and his comrades, fueled by the warmth of their growing affection and the promise of a future filled with adventure and possibility.

Special Jounin (1008 yr): Mizuki's promotion to Special Jounin within the ANBU Black Ops marked a significant achievement in his shinobi career. However, his happiness was overshadowed by Mononoke's decision to leave Kirigakure, forsaking her allegiance to become a criminal shinobi. Mizuki found himself torn between his love for Mononoke and his duty to his village, grappling with conflicting emotions as he struggled to come to terms with her betrayal. Meanwhile, Kirigakure faced internal turmoil as Mizukage Minako disappeared under mysterious circumstances, leaving the village in a state of uncertainty.

Despite the challenges he faced, Mizuki remained steadfast in his loyalty to Kirigakure, continuing to serve as a silent guardian of the village's interests. His reputation as the "Ghost of Bones" grew, as tales of his deadly abilities and ruthless efficiency spread among Kirigakure's enemies. Despite the accolades he received, Mizuki carried the pain of Mononoke's departure with him, haunted by memories of their time together and the choices that had led them down divergent paths.

As Mizukage Toru assumed leadership of Kirigakure, the village entered a new era of stability and growth. Under Toru's guidance, Kirigakure forged alliances with neighboring villages and expanded its influence in the region. Despite the challenges that lay ahead, Mizuki remained committed to his village, determined to uphold its honor and protect its interests at all costs.

Jounin (1012 yr): Mizuki's promotion to Jounin marked the culmination of years of training and dedication. As he continued his service in the ANBU Black Ops, Mizuki earned a fearsome reputation as the "Ghost of Bones," striking fear into the hearts of Kirigakure's enemies with his deadly abilities and unwavering determination. Despite his professional success, Mizuki struggled with the emotional fallout of Mononoke's departure, haunted by memories of their time together and the pain of her betrayal.

Meanwhile, Kirigakure faced challenges on the international stage as tensions with neighboring villages threatened to boil over into open conflict. Under the leadership of Mizukage Toru, the village navigated these tumultuous waters, seeking diplomatic solutions to avoid further bloodshed. Despite the uncertainties of the world around him, Mizuki remained steadfast in his commitment to his village, ready to sacrifice everything to protect Kirigakure and its people.

As the years passed, Mizuki's reputation as the "Ghost of Bones" grew, cementing his status as one of Kirigakure's most formidable shinobi. Yet, despite his outward success, Mizuki carried the pain of Mononoke's departure with him, a constant reminder of the fragility of love in a world consumed by conflict and betrayal.

Elite Jounin (1020 yr): Mizuki's appointment as Genin Team Leader marked a new chapter in his shinobi career. As he took on the responsibility of mentoring the next generation of Kirigakure's ninjas, Mizuki found himself grappling with his own demons, haunted by the memory of Mononoke and the pain of her departure. Despite his professional success, Mizuki remained emotionally distant, viewing his relationships through a lens of detachment and cynicism.

Meanwhile, Kirigakure continued to thrive under the leadership of Mizukage Toru, as the village expanded its influence and solidified its position as a major player on the shinobi stage. Despite the challenges that lay ahead, Mizuki remained committed to his village, determined to uphold its honor and protect its interests at all costs.

As he guided his team of young ninjas, Mizuki found solace in the companionship of a woman from a prominent family in Kirigakure. Despite their seemingly idyllic relationship, Mizuki remained distant, viewing their connection through a lens of detachment and cynicism. Yet, despite his efforts to keep his emotions at bay, Mizuki couldn't shake the lingering feeling of emptiness that gnawed at his soul, a constant reminder of the love he had lost and the pain of Mononoke's departure.


COMBAT INFORMATION

NATURAL CHAKRA: -- Hyoton
CHAKRA AFFINITIES: -- Hyoton, Suiton, Fuuton
SOLE SPECIALIZATION: -- Generalist
SUMMONING CONTRACT & FAMILIAR: -- Jellyfish


INVENTORY

  • 10 | Kuni (05 on left and right thigh)
  • 20 | Senbon (05 on left and right thigh)
  • 10 | Makibishi (in back waist pouch)
  • 1 | Wireless Radio (on collar)
  • 05 yards | Wire (in back waist pouch)
  • 10 | Shuriken (in back waist pouch)
  • 05 | Flash Bombs (5 right leg)
  • 05 | Smoke Bombs (5 left leg)
  • 10 | Paper bombs (5 on left and right leg)
  • 4 | Scrolls (4 small, around waist on belt)
  • 5 | Toxin Suppresent (in back waist pouch)
  • 1 | Yari Kunai (sealed in tattoo on his right wrist)
  • WIP | Kaguya Bone Scythe
  • WIP | Yuki Ice Scyle


SPECIAL ABILITIES


Shikotsumyaku - Bone Manipulation
Mizuki possesses the Shikotsumyaku bloodline, granting him the ability to manipulate his skeletal structure to create deadly weapons. With precise control, he can reshape his bones into spikes, blades, or shields, utilizing the Kaguya Clan's taijutsu techniques to deliver bone-shattering strikes.

Hyoton - Ice Release
Mizuki is skilled in the Yuki Clan's ice manipulation abilities, allowing him to create ice barriers and projectiles with finesse. His control over ice extends to mobility, enabling him to move across the battlefield with ease. However, these abilities are bound by the limitations of the clan's techniques and cannot extend beyond them.

Ehanced Reflexes
Mizuki's reflexes are honed to a razor's edge, allowing him to react with lightning-fast speed to any threat that comes his way. Whether it's dodging an opponent's attack or launching a counterstrike of his own, his reflexes enable him to move with unmatched agility and precision on the battlefield, giving him a crucial edge in combat.

One-Hand Seals
Mastering one-handed seals, Mizuki can weave hand signs swiftly and efficiently. This skill grants him the ability to perform jutsu with one hand at the same speed as those using two hands, enhancing his combat versatility.

Chakra Sensory
Mizuki possesses acute chakra sensory abilities, allowing him to detect the presence of individuals within a certain radius. However, this does not grant him the ability to discern intentions or foresee actions. His active sensing radius is 5km, while his passive sensing radius is 1km.

Enhanced Chakra Control:
Mizuki's mastery over chakra control enables him to manipulate his energy efficiently, minimizing waste. While this does not increase the potency of his jutsu, it allows him to perform advanced techniques with ease, showcasing his exceptional skill as a shinobi.


TECHNIQUES

S-RANK
Technique Name [English Translation]
Technique Name [English Translation]
Technique Name [English Translation]


A-RANK

Uchihagaeshi [Uchiha Return]
Kurumi Ki no Mai [Dance of the Walnut]
Hyōton Ryūō [Ice Release Dragon King]
Makyō Hyōshō [Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals]
Hyōten Hyakkasō [Frozen Heaven Hundred Flower Funeral]
Tessenka no Mai: Hana [Dance of the Clematis: Flower]
Nogiku no Mai [Dance of the Wild Chrysanthemum]
Nise Hoshu Tantōsha Baria [False Maintained Barrier]


B-RANK

Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru [Dance of the Clematis: Vine]
Ringo no Mai [Dance of the Apple]
Hone Janomai [Dance of the Bone Serpent]
Hyōton: Tōshō Shuryūdan [Ice Release: Frostbite Grenade]
Makyō Hakuhyō [Demon Mirror Thin Ice]
Hyōton: Kuiaratamenai Fuyu [Ice Release: Remorseless Winter]
Kuchiyose: Raikō Kenka - [Summoning: Lightning Flash Blade Creation]


C-RANK

Kuchiyose no Jutsu [Summoning Technique]
Kai [Release]
Yanagi no Mai [Dance of the Willow]
Shiragiku no Mai [Dance of the White Chrysanthemum]
Tsubaki no Mai [Dance of the Camellia]
Karamatsu no Mai [Dance of the Larch]
Hyō Bunshin [Ice Clone]
Hyōrō no Jutsu [Ice Prison Technique]
Hyōton: Sukaisukēto [Ice Style: Sky Skating]


D-RANK

Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique]
Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
Fūton: Kaze Sanpo [Wind Release: Wind Walk]
Shimogakure no Jursu [Hiding in Frost Technique]

E-RANK

Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]

Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]

Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]

Kakuremino no Jutsu [Cloak of Invisibility Technique]

Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Escape Technique]



OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

CHAT NAME: -- Chaos
HOW'D YOU FIND US?: -- Former Member
LOCKER COMBO: -- 46, AI, 159
FACE CLAIM SERIES: -- Genshin Impact
FACE CLAIM NAME: -- Neuvillette


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Kirigakure | Elite Jounin | Kaguya MizukiMar 13, 2024 17:48:19 GMT -5
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Hello Chaos,

Welcome back to NFB. There is a lot in this app that needs addressing so to make it simpler I shortened my review as much as possible to hit the most important things that need fixing.

Birthday: Needs the year he was born.
Clans: Both need to be linked.
Alias: Both need to be explained, why is he called that. Who calls him that and why.

Height/Weight: Please provide cm and kg metrics for both categories as well as the ft/lbs for those who do not live in the US.

History: This is going to need some work primarily there are zero mentions of important village and country related events. You will need to look at Kirigakure's history fallenblades.proboards.com/thread/17931/kirigakure-sato-history and include things that would have impacted Mizuki. Furthermore you can't jump from special jounin to elite jounin, you will need to expand on what he was doing between those two ranks (ie being a jounin).

Summons: Need to be linked

Inventory: You will need to be more specific where he keeps everything. This is a lot to keep one one's person at all times. What is '30 wire' do you mean 30 meters of wire?

4 scrolls - how big? Are these 4 tiny scrolls?

What are these: 5 | Rat Poison
5 | Fear Poison
5 | Pain Poison
5 | Drowsiness Poison
5 | Truth Poison

Link them or app them.

Special Abilities:

Shikotsumyaku - Bone Manipulation
- There's quite a bit of fluff here, he wouldn't be able to manipulate and do whatever he likes outside of the KKG parameters or without jutsu. Remove wording such as "with a mere thought"

Hyoton - Ice Release
- Same as above there is a bit of fluff and it would be limited to the allowances of the KKG. Remove wording such as "With a mere gesture". "His control over ice extends to mobility, allowing him to glide effortlessly across the battlefield, leaving a trail of frost in his wake." This would need to be a jutsu or a separate SA entirely.

"Coupled with his strategic prowess" you do not have an SA for strategic prowess so please remove this.

One-Hand Seals
- "This skill allows him to cast his techniques swiftly and efficiently, without the need for elaborate movements that would otherwise leave him vulnerable to enemy attacks."
This needs to be changed, mostly because one handed seals do not grant speed to create jutsu. It specifically grants the ability to weave hand seals with one hand - at the same speed as someone who would do it with two hands.

Chakra Sensory
- Chakra sensory does not allow for the discernment of intention. It allows you to pick up on individuals with chakra signatures within a certain radius, it does not work like the sharingan. It's like a blip radar in essence. Remove any wording that indicates that he is able to detect intention or foresee what people will do.

As an elite jounin you would be allowed this radius for sensing, please include it in your description.
Active: 5km / Passive: 1km

Enhanced Chakra Control:
- "power more efficiently, maximizing the potency of his jutsu and minimizing wasted energy. This level of control also enables Mizuki to perform advanced techniques with ease, pushing the limits of his abilities to achieve feats that would be impossible for lesser shinobi."

remove the part about potency, chakra control does not allow for jutsu to become stronger. Chakra control means you were born with a smaller than average pool of chakra and you are forced to work on your control to make sure you are not wasteful. Remove "pushing limits to achieve feats that would be impossible for lesser shinobi" since this has nothing to do with control either.

Jutsu:

Please fix the order of the jutsu before I proceed in making sure that the correct amount is listed. It should be S - A - B - C - D - E OR E - D - C - B - A - S from top to bottom. Whichever way you choose does not matter it should just be in order.
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Kirigakure | Elite Jounin | Kaguya MizukiMar 20, 2024 10:53:51 GMT -5
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Alias: Still needs to be explained, who calls him that. Where. Here's an example of how aliases should look. %20%E5%B0%91%E5%B9%B4%E7%8E%8B%20%5Bboy%20king%5D%20%5Bworld%5D" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">fallenblades.proboards.com/thread/13627/kaguya-toru-mizukage-kirigakure#:~:text=Sh%C5%8Dnen%2D%C5%8D%20%E5%B0%91%E5%B9%B4%E7%8E%8B%20%5Bboy%20king%5D%20%5Bworld%5D

Appearance: Why does he have pointed ears? Ninja are humans so there is quite literally no reason for this especially since Yuki and Kaguya have no noticeable traits like this?

History:
"Anbu Black Ops" Kiri does not have this. There are the Oinin or Hunter Nin Corps. However they are quite secret and would not be known or 'respected' since only higher ups are aware of the position and who holds said position as a whole.

I'm not certain about this "the village started to prosper under Yuki Nobuhiro" please read the history that I linked. The Kaguya in 991 (when Mizuki is only a year old) defect from the village entirely siding with the Daimyo after a huge disagreement between Daimyo and the Mizukage. That means that Mizuki would have grown up without a father - unless he lived with him then he would have defected with the Kaguya and grown up without a mother.

Academy Student - Please see above comments, he would likely be ostracized if he had shown his Kaguya bone manipulation being that the Kaguya would NOT be in Kirigakure at this point in time. In fact there would be a lot of fighting going on between Daimyo's forces (which included the entirety of the Kaguya clan and some Sourei) and the Kirigakure no Sato forces.

Genin - You have a Kaguya listed as a genin on Mizuki's genin team, as previously mentioned... this would be impossible. Please read the history I linked previously.

I'm sorry but I will not continue to read the history, it needs to be changed. Please read the history I linked. There is absolutely no mention of the extreme tensions from almost the moment Mizuki was born or how he navigates those tensions as half Kaguya he would almost certainly face a lot of issues from the village and be seen suspiciously. There is no mention of how he dealt with the Sanbi rampage. You also have Toru's leadership come under a listed year of 1008 which makes no sense if you had read the history I linked.

Inventory:
Poisons such as these are only available for puppeteers and medics without an SA. Since Mizuki is neither a puppeteer or a medic you will need to add a specific poison SA or remove the poisons from inventory.

I am also not certain that someone can just carry all of this without making a lot of noise / being weighed down. I would say please reduce some of these numbers overall.

Jutsu:
All these jutsu need to be linked.
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