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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi Mar 31, 2024 3:27:01 GMT -5
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Yutakako Daichi
Explosive Eccentric
BASIC INFORMATION

NAME: Yutakako Daichi
AGE:  18
GENDER: male
BIRTHDAY: January, 3 1006
VILLAGE: IWAGAKURE
CLAN: Yutakako Clan Memeber
RANK: TOKUBETSU JOUNIN
POSITION:  Genin Team 1 - Team Leader
Bakuha Gundan Second Seat: Lieutenant of Demolition

OTHER ALIAS:
Mad bomber of iwa | [friends/acquaintances| eneimes] Due to the appeaernce  of him  not bieng right in the head due to how he choses to use it and the fact he has bursted out of laugher like a insane person while his explsions where going off

Explosive Eccentric | [Friends/Acquaintances]: Due to His odd and unusual behavior when it comes to the use of explosions and how uncomfortably attachment and dedication to it


APPEARANCE

HEIGHT:  5' 6" (172 cm)
WEIGHT: 180 lbs. (81.65 kg)

A young man named Daichi is shorter than average in height and weight for a man his age. He stands a whole five feet six inches tall and weighs one hundred and eighty pounds. He usually wears a Stoic facial expression, has red eyes and wild, white hair that covers the right side of his face. Beneath his robe, he displays a noticeable amount of muscle and scars from his time in Iwagakure. He's dressed in the traditional Iwagakure shinobi uniform, which consists of a black tattsuke bakama, a black robe with long, frayed sleeves, and a white sash tied at his waist.

When he's ready for battle, he also dons a turtleneck dickey as a mask to cover the lower portion of his face. He has gaiters fastened to his legs and is dressed in sandals and ninja gauntlets. When he is teaching his students or hanging out around the village, he is dressed in a typical iwa flak jacket with a black undershirt under his flak jacket. His flak jacket lack a sleeve on one side with a buttoned at the top and with a bag on the back, a red sash over the right leg, fishnet stockings, and a pair of black open-toe shoes.

PERSONALITY

NINDO:  There are very few personal problems that cannot be solved through a suitable application of high explosives.

Yutakako Daichi seems very strange and sometimes even crazy. He has scientific thinking and belief when it comes to the use of Bakuton and creation of jutsu for the clan.  He believes in scientific experimentation, with Bakuton, and seeks to create more explosion through jutsu and to make the clan even greater in Iwagakura.  Due to eccentrics and his display of mental instability, Daich has been perceived as a little mentally unstable and, in celebration of one outburst, has been known as the "mad bomber” on the battlefield. Daichi shows himself to be a committed ninja, despite being loud and conceited. He has no qualms about the horrors he does, and sees his "experiments” and murders as important steps forward in his never-ending research to make the clan the greatest.  In combat, he can flip a mental switch that turns him cruel and sadistic, cursing his opponents for their weakness and inferiority and looking down on them for falling prey to his bakuton arts and preventing him experimenting more on them, leading to him getting poor results. Daichi outside of combat has shown to have great awareness and despite what he appears to others has shown to have a great mind when it comes to leading people and helping the younger generation.  He also has shown to work very well with others and cares a lot for his clan and his village and would do anything to help them that also includes blowing him self up to keep it safe.  Daichi is witty and analytic and is able to determine the best approach to either defeat an opponent or how to sync with people he is working to get the best result he can, but also determine the skill level a ninja is at and figure out roughly what their potential as a ninja is.  

HISTORY

Early Childhood (1006 - 1012)

Daichi is the grandson of one clan members that helped found the hidden village. His grandfather on his mother's side is a great-grandson of one of the entrepreneurs that founded the city of Yamanashi. His parents met in Iwagakure no Sato, as his mother and father joined the academy, became students there. Daichi's parents later met as genin, and they feel in love at first sight. The blush and later got married, and it was during this time that his mother revealed she was with child and got leave from the kage, so his mother focus on childbirth. It was nine months later that he was born and weighted nine pounds ten ounces. His mother after having him decided to refocus and became a teacher at the academy. She would teach the next generation, go home and spend time with her son and husband. He spent the next years playing with other kids in the village, a lot of them from his clan. He was spending his next four years rather normal for a kid growing up in a hidden village.

Academy (1013 - 1017)

Daichi entered the academy with other kids from around Iwagakure at the age of seven years old. He was worried during this time as his parents were dragged into the civil with his cousins, through he knew of basics as they opposed one in control and wished for someone else to be leader of the village. He was a year younger than the rest of his fellow students. Furthermore, he seemed to do will with academic aspects of the academy so much he was in the top ten of students in the academy in grades besides the turmoil that was happening in the shadows that is the civil war. In addition, he struggles with chakra control and got a barely passing grade in it. When it came to combat training, he did not so bad and was just barely above average compared to his fellow students. Daichi struggled with the application of forming chakra and using the right amount to use jutsu. Diachi spent four years going to academy playing and studying  so he is not left behind, and his classmates move on. It was during these years the traumatic civil war was put to an end, and he happily got his family and friends back and celebrated the new era with them. Using his massive chakra pool and average control of chakra, he was able to perform the test. He graduated from the academy with outstanding academic scores and average score in the conceptions of various jutsu, training with multiple weapons and taijutsu.

Genin (1017-1021)

After graduating, his grandfather took the time and painfully passed on the Iwa chakra infusion kinjutsu to him. He spent the next couple of days learning and getting help in developing jutsu as well. He was also helped to learn and find a new material to use with the kinjutsu that's not clay. After many exposures and with the help of his grandfather, he found out that chalk be what he would choose to use with the kinjutsu. He would the next day using the information giving to him on where the team meeting would be and would go to the meet up and learn more about his teammates and their sensei. Furthermore, he and his teammates were tested by their new sensei, and they passed at the end due to the fear that they would fail if they did hit him. He would then meet up with his teammates and sensei and do various very basic d rank missions, such as babysitting younger children, finding lost pets etc. He would with his team do a lot of D rank missions and a few C rank missions with his team, including a few escorting missions and a few bandit fighting missions. Daichi and his teammates had no idea what his Sensei had planned for them and what they would be taking part of.

Chunin Years (1021- 1023

Daichi would do more genin missions with his teammates until one day his sensei revealed to them that he had put them up to take part in the chunin exam. He and his team did not to bad in the first few parts of the exams, and struggled a little in the written part that checked for cheating. He and his teammates did well enough to make it to the final test. Not only that, but he won his first match, putting on display some of his clan's jutsu including of his own personally made jutsu that used his iwa chakra infusion. He also used chalk and academy jutsu as well to overwhelm and over power his opponent. His other teammates did not bad, but one of his teammates was defeated and removed from the quarterfinals. He continued and displayed his clan's jutsu and his jack of trades like knowledge and approach to his clan jutsu allowed him to win and move onto the finals of the exams. He would catch his opponent off guard with Bakufū Tenohira to do damage and stagger into hit him into his spiders that been laying in wait and exploding, granting him the victory. Daichi besides only having the academy jutsu and a few clan jutsu and his cleverness and resourcefulness was enough to be granted a promotion to chunin. He spent the next couple of years doing d c and a b rank missions when they were assigned to him, he would then, on the recommendation of his grandfather, he would join the blast corps as a member. When Daichi was not on missions, he would train in more jutsu of his clan and develop even more jutsu.

Sp joinin (1023 to Present)

He would continue to do missions, he even does a few a rank mission with the blast corps. He would also continue  to train and start to experiment in the clan jutsu and became primarily specialized in clan ninjutsu and second specialization in clan fuuinjutsu. Furthermore, he also showed to be able to teach through his methods, where a little cruel, but he showed he was effected and the Tsuchikage put him on a list of potential sensei for genin. He would do a lot of missions and learned more jutsu and developed even more. He would then, after impressing the Tsuchikage with all his hard work and his dedication, and seeing as he is a clan specialist, promoted him to the rank of special jonin. Furthermore, he would continue to do missions and after a few missions he was giving the rank of Lieutenant of Demolition in the blast corpse. Not only that, but he would then, on top of his duties as a blast corpse lieutenant, he would go and have a meeting with the Tsuchikage who is a fellow clan member of the clan. Furthermore, he would have been informed and learned that he had been chosen and was ordered to lead a three-man team of genins. In addition, he accepted it and finished all his current quest before he took the official role as team 1 squad leader. He then spent a night making plans and how he was going to lead them and train them and help them improve, as his sensei and grandfather had for himself.

FIGHTING STYLE

Daichi's fighting style can be considered a combination of terrorist guerrilla warfare and street fighting. Daichi uses bakuton element a lot in his fighting style, that he often mixes in a bakuton jutsu in it. His fighting style is about ambushing and overpowering his opponents with his Explosion by either using his chalk creations or his clan's jutsu. He also has jutsu that he uses not to defeat or over power, but to psychologically effect or even set them up for a follow-up jutsu. He uses his surrounding to his benefits and not afraid to also use mental bombs to mess with his opponents to get them off their game so he can take advantage of it.

COMBAT INFORMATION

NATURAL CHAKRA: Katon (Fire ) and Raiton (Lightening ).  
CHAKRA AFFINITIES: Bakuton, Doton (earth), Fūton 
PRIMARY SPECIALIZATION: Ninjutsu  
SECONDARY SPECIALIZATION:  Fuuinjutsu
SUMMONING CONTRACT & FAMILIAR: N/A


INVENTORY


  • Head
  • Iwa Hitai-ate

  • Flak Jacket

  • 02 | 25m Ninja Wire
  • 02 | Small Scrolls [25 Kunai sealed in each]
  • 02 | Small Scrolls [10 pounds of chalk sealed in each]
  • 02 | Small Scrolls [Blank]
  • 100 |  tags for seals
  • 05 | Smoke Bombs
  • 100 | Explosion Notes [Sealed In Scroll]
  • 40 | Smoke bombs[Sealed in Scroll]

  • Holster ( Right Thigh) 

  • 10 | Senbon
  • 15 | Kunai
  • 20 | Shuriken 

  • Holster (Hip)
  • 20 | Shuriken
  • 10 | Smoke Bombs
  • 01 | 50m Wire String Reel
  • 10 | Blank Sealing Tags
  • 10 | Flash Bombs
  • 10 | premade  lemon Grenades
  • 10 | Explosive Tags

  • Large fuinjutsu gourd (back)
  • 100 pounds | explosive chalk sealed in gourd 
  • 25 pounds | Chalk 


SPECIAL ABILITIES


Clan  KG #1

Daichi inherited the kgg to create bakuton that he can use at elite level.  He is much more versatile than any other Yutakako clan member when it comes to the of Bakuton Element.  

Iwagakure Kinjutsu #2

Daichi After passing the academy and becoming a genin his grandfather passed on the iwa infusion kinjutsu to him. He took a little to find a good medium that work for him before he chose chalk. He became skilled at using chalk powder to make explosive chalk powder that a key to a few of his jutsu and fuuinjutsu. 

Enhanced Chakra Reserves #3

Daiachi more chakra than others of his rank. His initial lack of control was compensated for by his sheer reserves, which were sufficient to withstand three and a half days of combat against multiple formidable opponents. 

Speed bakuton  #4

Daichi through many experiments and use in wars and missions, is able to perform handseals and creation of chalk faster than others of his rank.


TECHNIQUES

Jutsu

Color Code
fuuinjutsu - b1c5c7
Bakuton clan - dea915
Bakuton clan custom - e25007
Ninjutsu - EE82EE
Katon - ff7171
Futon - 51b664
Raiton - bec27d
Doton - 836700
Suiton - 0c52a7
Genjutsu - efe3eb
Taijutsu - b6a6a9
Bukijutsu - b6a6a9


S-RANK

Technique Name [English Translation]
Technique Name [English Translation]
Technique Name [English Translation]


A-RANK

Bakudan Choku: Jibaku Bunshin [Explosive Chalk Powder: Self-destructive Clone]
Technique Name [English Translation]
Technique Name [English Translation]


B-RANK

Bakudan Choku: Kuro Hae Taigun [Explosive Chalk Powder: Blackfly Swarm]
Bakudan Choku: remon gurenēdo [Explosive Chalk Powder: lemon grenades]
Bakudan Choku: Iryūjon [Explosive Chalk Powder: illusion]

Bakudan Choku: Maboroshi Mukade [Explosive Chalk Powder: Crawling Centipede]
Bakuhatsu Chōku Shīruhō: Mirā Atakkā [Explosive Chalk Sealing Method: Mirror Attacker]
Bakuhatsu Chōku Shīruhō: Jirai [Explosive Chalk Sealing Method: Landmine]
Bakudan Choku: ōsuzumebachi (Explosive Chalk Powder: Giant Sparrow Bee)

Bakudan Choku: ōsuzumebachi Mure [Explosive Chalk Powder: Giant Sparrow Bee Swarm]
Bakudan Choku: Yatagarasu [Explosive Chalk Powder: three-legged crow]


C-RANK

Bakudan Choku: kimura-gumo [Explosive Chalk Powder: kimura spider]
Gantoretto bakuhatsu [Exploding Gauntlets]
Būtsu o bakuhatsu [Exploding Boots]
Tsukanoma no tatchi [Fleeting Touch]
Fūbaku Hōin [Explosive Sealing Method]
Fūbaku Hōin: Futae no In [Explosive Sealing Method: Two-Fold Seal]
Fūbaku Hōin: Sokubaku no In [Explosive Sealing Method: Restricting Seal]
Bakufū Tenohira [Blast Palm]
Bakufū Chūnyū [Blast Infusion]

D-RANK

Bakudan Choku: Maneru [Explosive Chalk Powder: Mimic]
Fūbaku Maneru [Explosive Mimic]
Bakuhatsu yashi [Exploding Palm]


E-RANK

Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
kuremino no Jutsu [Cloak of Invisibility Technique]
Nawanuke no Jutsu [Rope Escape Technique]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION


CHAT NAME: Ian
HOW'D YOU FIND US?:  rpg directory 
LOCKER COMBO: 31, ua , 150 
FACE CLAIM SERIES: Jigokuraku 
FACE CLAIM NAME: Gabimaru

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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi Apr 19, 2024 21:37:51 GMT -5
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Heyah Ian. Sorry it took so long for someone to get to your app. Let's start with the surface things that I noticed...

Age: If he's 18, he'd have been born in 1006, not 1005. If you want him to be born in 1005, he'll need to be 19.

Elements: So as a Special jounin with Ninjutsu Primary, he'd be allowed to use the Jounin limit for Elemental affinities, which means you would actually get 3, giving you two mor other than Bakuton.

Locker Combo: If you intend to keep his birhtday the same, you'll need to fix the locker combo.
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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi Apr 22, 2024 13:34:42 GMT -5
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1. I will fix asap it should be 1006

2. Interesting and I will add to it asap

3. will fix this asap


update:

1. is complete, changed 5 to a six in dob

2. added doton to the list and is complete

3. locker combo should be complete since it is first is age +13, second is the second letter of his first and last name, and third is his weight minus 30
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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi May 1, 2024 22:55:28 GMT -5
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You haven't updated the Affinities- you still only have Bakuton there.

SAs
Ok, so having gone through your SA's I have to say that there are some things that need to be changed:

Your First SA reads like a KKG SA mixed with an Enhanced Bakuton SA, which is a solid no-no. Please separate this into just a Bakuton KKG SA and, if you wish to keep his Enhanced Bakuton, an SA for that (you will have to remove one of his other SA though).

Your Second SA is fine.

Your Third SA need to be changed to not have any mention of him having anywhere near the level chakra it current does, and certainly not when he was a Genin. Change it to read that he has "more chakra than others of his rank," which will put it in line with other Reserves SAs.

Your Fourth SA... I'm not really sure what this does? It says it lets him "use or create his bakuton beyond the natural limit the average Yutakako clan member" but doesn't explain what those limits are or how he breaks them. What are you intending wit this?
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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi May 5, 2024 0:06:12 GMT -5
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update

sla 1 issue fixed changed it to a Bakuton KKG SA

sla 2 no issue stated

sla 3 issue fixed added more chakra than others of his rank into the sla

sla 4 issue fixed changed it in hopes it makes more sense
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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi May 12, 2024 0:15:37 GMT -5
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Ok so you still haven't fixed your Chakra affinities. It should look something like this:

NATURAL CHAKRA: Katon & Raiton
CHAKRA AFFINITIES: Bakuton, Doton, & [Insert 3rd affinity]

Sa's
So you add in a line in SA 3 about him having "exceptional longevity, healing capabilities, endurance, and vitality," which is like... four SA's in one. Please remove this, as Enhanced reserves gives you ONLY enhanced reserves.

SA 4 should read "faster than others of his rank."

History
I'd like to ask to look over the history and give it her thumbs up, as she's the leader of Iwa.

That being said, this entirety of this app (but especially the history) is quite difficult to read, with a lot of grammatical errors and somewhat off syntax- I'd like you to spend some time cleaning this up, so people can have an easier time reading through it.
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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi May 12, 2024 0:38:23 GMT -5
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1. o.o I thought I have will work on this

2. well chop out other stuff asap

3. will change to what was requested

4. will put sections of my app through a grammar/ spelling checker asap to hopefully clear it up
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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi May 12, 2024 1:00:06 GMT -5
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All changes have been made other than having the iwa boss lady looking it over.

It was put through Grammarly and LanguageTool so hopefully it better, if not please let me know I may have to rewrite it as it might be how wrote it making it hard to read.
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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi May 13, 2024 13:22:41 GMT -5
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Alright Ian. Here's what needs fixing:

Aliases: You have two different aliases, one at the top of the app under his name and one in the Alias section, and no explanation for why he has either. You'll need to list both in the Alias section and give at least a small explanation as to why people call him that, as well as put in brackets where people know him by that name.

Appearance: We ask for a minimum of two paragraphs for a character's appearance. Please add another paragraph. If you're having trouble figuring out what to add, I suggest checking the newbie guide for help.

Nindo: So this... doesn't really make sense? A Nindo is usually a phrase or idea that a character centers their worldview around, but this is kind of just a statement saying he likes explosions? I would check other character apps to see what a good Nindo looks like- it should help you figure out where to go from here.

Personality: Somewhat the same as the above, I suggest you look through other character apps to get a feel for what a good personality would read like- as it stands now this is very difficult to read and understand, with a lot of contradicting information that doesn't paint a clear picture of who Daichi is.

History: So I asked Yoshiko to go through your History and, while most of it is fine on a detail level, Daichi's grandfather wouldn't have been able to be one of the founders of Yamanashi, as the city is one of the oldest in Iwa at several hundred years old (though he could have bene related to a founder). Additionally, you make no mention of the Iwa Civil War, which took place right when Daichi was in the Academy. Since the Yutakako were heavily involved int he Civil War, I would suggest going back through the Clan history (found in the link) and figure out how Daichi would have been affected by the whole affair.

Jutsu: A minor thing, but Daichi is not a Sage or a Sage apprentice, so he would not have access to any form of Senjutsu, so please remove that bit from the app.

Grammar: I know you said you ran this through Grammarly and Languagetool, but I would like it if you went through this whole thing and manually rewrote pretty much everything. You have a lot of errors in both spelling and grammar, so much so I'm not sure how either of those programs missed them, and which are too numerous for me to list out in detail here, as I don't want to make your eyes glaze over with a wall of text.
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IWAGAKURE | TOKUBETSU JOUNIN | Yutakako Daichi May 14, 2024 19:59:02 GMT -5
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Update

did the correction to the alias as requested

did correction to the nido

did correction on jutsu removed mention of senjutsu in color code for jutsu

Fixed the appearance, made it two paragraphs as it needs to be

fixed the personality rewrote a good portion of it

fixed the history and included how he felt and effects of civil war throughout his years in academy

All completed
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